I really hope you consider continuing this. I love this AU, and you’re doing an amazing job of writing it. The characterization is pretty top-notch (especially with Allura’s bias and Coran’s willingness to accept and move on), the writing’s tight and has little to no errors, and the concept is good as well. I know that I can’t make you start writing again, but maybe I can make it so that you know how good of a job you’ve done so far anyway.
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Maven_Fair on Chapter 3 Sun 22 Jul 2018 11:17PM UTC
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