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  1. likelightning (Guest) on Chapter 11 Fri 23 Nov 2012 08:35AM UTC

    ohhh geez, i spent the majority of this story thinking, you assholes. perfect characterization of h.g.'s wicked flirty side. in that epilogue, i could practically see jaime murray stepping from the pages. this was, all in all, the best execution of the time traveling reunion idea that's been floating around. the emotions were strong and real and the plot moved right along. bravo!

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    1. mysensitiveside on Chapter 11 Tue 04 Dec 2012 06:09AM UTC

      Haha, I will definitely choose to take "you assholes" as a compliment in this context. ;) I'm really glad the characterization came across well. I always visualize scenes in my head as I write, so it's great when readers get a sense of that too. And there are a bunch of great time travel fics out there, so I'm flattered that you thought this worked! Thank you! :)

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