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  1. SoBe on Chapter 2 Sat 04 Aug 2018 11:14AM UTC

    Your notes make me almost as happy as your fic does :) I agree with everything! It’s so awesome to be reading a fic by someone who gets all my issues with s5....

    So many great things about this chapter:

    I loved that Harper got some screen time, and not just as an adjunct to Monty. Also that Monty’s still heartbroken/bitter in being in another war. I loved the heart/head struggle Bellamy’s dealing with. I love that he can see Clarke’s presence in the valley and in her map. And that Madi knows them. And that ravens on the ground from the getgo, doing what she does best. Oh and how you tied in Eligius to the radio calls.

    I love the memori bits and how protective Murphy is of clarke (I’ve said it on another of your fics. And I’ll say it again, they’re one of my favorite brotps, and you write them so well!). Also I love your Mad8 and Murphy interactions! And what you’re trying to do with echo....you’re definitely got a better handle on her character than what we’ve seen on the show, imo....

    And hey, yay! I also love that Lincoln got a mention, and a non-octavia one at that. As much as i May like linctavia, she’s not the only one connected to him, and missing him.

    Now I can’t wait to see how the bunker is faring... oh and will jaspers letter make an appearance? Looking forward to whatever you post next :)

    Last Edited Sat 04 Aug 2018 04:12PM UTC

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    1. ChasetheWindTouchtheSky on Chapter 2 Thu 09 Aug 2018 08:51PM UTC

      Thank you so much for all of this! Now that the season’s concluded and I know where they end, I actually finally feel free... and i’m Grateful you like my notes because I feel like i’m Consistently just shouting into the void... :P

      I’m excited though because the arc will be that of Wanheda - which I GENUINELY thought they were doing and was so startled with where they sent Clarke’s character... I wasn’t the biggest fan, so I’m seeing if I can pull off what I had hoped would happen with her (hence the title).

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