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This feels like a really bittersweet beginning especially for Akira. I really love the way things are described so far like Akira’s sadness and feelings. The way the environments are described also really sets the mood. The characters seem really in character to me too, so I can really see them taking these actions and gestures. I look forward to the next one, I’m excited to see what happens!!! Thank you for the story so far!!! Thank you for the art too!!! ♡
Thank you June! I'm so glad you like it and your feedback means a lot! I'm also glad they're in character-- I always hope I get them right. Acton and I will get to work on the next bit <3
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