[ha, okay, it took 5 comments. jeez. look at me go. spending 40 whole minutes on writing an incredibly long comment and then posting it. ay yi yi. i hope you enjoyed my rambling!]
[[okay so i tried to add that on the previous comment and say 4 comments that it took, but then it still ended up being too long, even with deleting that part. so literally. the 5th comment is just this small ramble and me saying "UGGHH IT'S SO GOOOD" .......oops. but i felt like i needed to add it, since i wrote it, and it is apart of this comment, so yeah. enjoy.
...seriously, i loved all of this so much, you have no idea.
your writing is so good.
okay, i need to stop. BYE]]
EDIT: OH MY GOD I COMPLETELY FORGOT.
THE NAME.
OMG.
THAT'S WHAT I HAD BEEN FORGETTING BEFORE
OH MY GOD XD
FFS
ANYWAY LIKE.
I REALLY LIKE "CHESHIRE" LIKE THAT ONE PERSON SAID.
I WAS THINKING IT'D BE FUNNY IF BLUE CALLED THEM CHESIRE AND STRETCH STUCK TO "KITTEN" BECAUSE THEN LIKE
CHESHIRE KITTEN
IT'D BE PERFECT AND HILARIOUS HAHA
ANYWAY
I DUNNO WHAT OTHER NAME COULD FIT
I PERSONALLY THINK "CHESHIRE" FITS THE BEST? BUT YEAH. I ALSO LOVED THAT OTHER PERSON'S SUGGESTION OF "MINT".
BUT YEAH. WOO. I CANT WAIT FOR A NAME TO USE SO I CAN STOP SAYING "READER" AND "THE CAT"
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AND-
HECK IM GONNA RAMBLE AGAIN NO DAMNIT
UH
JUST
I CANT WAIT FOR THEIR BRAINSTORMING BECAUSE THEN THE CAT'S GONNA LIKE PHYSICALLY SHOW 'EW' TO CERTAIN NAMES UNTIL THE BROS GET ONE RIGHT
OKAY
OKAY
IM DONE I SWEAR
I LITERALLY SPAM YOUR COMMENT SECTION JEEZ
I HOPE YOU DONT MIND
HA
B Y E
edit 2: ...hi again. oops. a few things. i am sorry for some of the typos in this but apparently when i reply to my own comments i can't go back and edit those comments? i can only edit the latest one. which is weird. anyway anOther thought that i realized i forgot to add in my exhaustion. yeah. heck. basically. y'know what i'd be super excited to see? when they find out that the cat is human and like. if they're actually nonbinary. like i know you write them as they/them fooorrrr reader purposes? you said you enjoy writing characters with they/them since there's not many. but like. c'mon. centuries old shapeshifter. TOTALLY nonbinary, right? and just it'd be cool to see it actually addressed in the story as part of the character. i dunno. just figured i'd share my thoughts! but heck blue and stretch would be so supportive about it and hnngnG. just. yeah. ha. i love your story so much.
i really need to stop adding to this before i make 6 comments. uh. but yeah.
heck. i really adore this story man. it's so good. okay. i'm going now. i'm doNE. heck. yeah. alright. b y e
And HECC YEAH I CAN’T WAIT TO MAKE THEM REALIZE “OH CRAP I REALLY LIKE THESE TWO OH NOES” and HHHH i’m excited for so much in this story ahhh and I’m glad you liked the little details I add- I find that they sort of help characterize people and settings and create a clearer picture so I try to use it but like. Not so it overwhelms people.
On another note tho STOP BEING SO SMART. I’m not saying what it is exactly but STOP IT. Except don’t because I love it ahhhh. And also DON’T STOP BEING THE BLUE IN MY COMMENT SECTION BECAUSE JUST SEEING YOUR USER MAKES ME SO HAPPY. I CAN’T STOP SMILING. <3
AND ALSO YOU DESERVE A SHOUT OUT? BECAUSE YOU’RE AMAZING AND I ALREADY REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY AND I’M SO CURIOUS TO SEE WHERE IT GOES??? AND TO LEARN EVERYTHING ABOUT YOUR CHARACTERS AND THEIR WORLDS?? I AM EXCITE???
And as for your last bit I do intend to keep them non-binary and have them still go by they/them, because I don’t see why that has to change when they’re a person and you’re totally right? XD They’re so old they don’t have time for stupid trivial things to do with gender like NO THANKS FAM I’M JUST GONNA BE A CAT AND HANG OUT OVER HERE WITH MY COOL SKELETON FAM YES THANK YOU
All in all I just really appreciate you coming into my inbox to scream at me about things you like at six in the morning like. It really makes my day and I get so excited when I see it and it just makes me? So happy ahhhh I can’t EVEN TELL YOU how it feels to get your messages and jjust hhhhhhhh- <3
Thank you. ;v;
(Also, that’s a fourth vote for Cheshire! I’m getting a feeling it might be the winner here and I’m chill with that. XDDDD)
AAAAA HEY I GOT BUSY AND I COULDN’T RESPOND. ANYWAY OMG HAHA I GOT YOU TO ALSO HAVE TO LEAVE MULTIPLE COMMENTS XD ANYWAY imgonnaanswerinorderofwhatyousaid I WILL DEFINITELY LEAVE AS MANY COMMENTS AS I WANT/NEED TO DEPENDING ON HOW LONG I RANT HAHAHA THE FEELS WERENT JARRING OR TOO SUDDEN PEOPLE GET REMINDED OF THINGS EASILY AND AT THE LITTLEST THINGS. LIKE HONESTLY SOMEONE COULD PROBABLY LOOK AT A CERTAIN SHAPED ROCK AND THEN BE LIKE THAT REMINDS ME OF THIS ONE TIME I- HAHA BUT YEAH THE FEELS WERE GREAT AND YOU PUT IT IN AT A PERFECT TIME!!! ALSO OMG OMG IM SO GLAD YOU GOT A PLOT NOW! IM SO EXCITED AAAAA IWILLDEFINITELYGIVEYOUALLOFMYTHEORIES IM GLAD THEY ARENT GONNA LEAVE THE OTHER FAMILIES BEHIND!!! also yes the little details DO help characterize people and it does create a better picture of the story!!! you do it in a perfect way, too, where you don’t overwhelm the readers :D i dIDNT MEAN TO BE SMART MY MIND JUST OVERTHINKS A LOT HAHA IM GLAD MY COMMENTS MAKE YOU HAPPY AND OMG YOU READ MY FRIEND AND I’S STORY??? AAA THAT’S GREAT THAT MAKES ME REALLY HAPPY OMG AND WE HAVE A L O T WRITTEN SO THERE’S GONNA BE A NEW CHAPTER VERY SOON!! :D [edit i posted the new chapter before i put up this comment oops] and yesss i’m glad they’re gonna stay nb and stuff like that!!
i’m super happy that my comments make your day aaa! ALRIGHT i saw that you heckin posted ANOTHER chapter so i’m gonna go read that now! :D
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