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  1. Hortensia_Rose on Chapter 1 Thu 30 Oct 2014 05:06AM UTC

    So he wrung the warm cloth of its water, and gently traced the features of the Englishman’s face. He relearnt the hollows of eye sockets, the strong arch of a curved nose, the bow of sanctioning lips. As Lehnsherr learnt all that he had forgotten in the ashen mists and isolated country – everything he left in bunkers and in trading posts and cities that were filled with ghosts and people more lost than himself – he felt that he was not imposing on Charles’ body; he was a student and Charles was teaching him what it was to be human again.

    What a lovely paragraph! *claps*

    I hope I won't come away with a broken heart after chapter 3! :P

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    1. Geertrui on Chapter 1 Fri 31 Oct 2014 01:43PM UTC

      Thank you so much for your comment, I really appreciate it! :D x

      haha, only time will tell ;)

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