This is fantastic. You painted a wonderful portrait here of Alan and of the women who helped make him who he is. The original characters are so engaging and real-seeming, somehow feeling so fleshed-out even in these small snippets. I love how each section is like a snapshot, capturing a moment or a series of moments in Alan's life, each adding depth.
Thank you so much! I'm really glad the original ladies came out as real, for you. I was worried they'd come out as a little too broadly sketched, in the shorter scenes, so hearing they were enjoyed makes me very happy!
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