Nevay (Guest)
on Chapter 7
Thu 16
Aug 201808:31PM UTC
What a wonderful story with a pacing that reads like smooth, creamy peanut butter. I’m getting warm feels all over! You did an excellent job characterizing everyone and everything happened believably, to an extent in which it all just feels like an extension of canon. Ten years down the road when I’m having my midlife crisis, I’m certain I’ll revisit this as an old favorite.
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