Thank you! I have no beta so there is always some typos or lost words I find much later while re-reading the fic. I made the adjustments.
I have one question though. There is the his mind screamed later. I corrected it but it's frequently showing, in the books I read for example, in the previous version, screamed his mind later. Most of my native-speaking colleagues use it this way too, in their works. The only reason I could think of is the difference between British and American English. I use mostly British and only write in American, since majority of works is in American. Is it a feature of American English or something?
Well, thank you again for poiting out my mistakes! I feel much better correcting them.
It’s possible that it might be a linguistic thing or even a brain fart on my part, since I’m not a native speaker either, but it gave me the impression of not being the right structure at the time.
If you’re used to seeing that sentence in books then you should keep it that way. The other stuff was all stuff I was absolutely sure about, which is why I tried to mark it more than that particular sentence.
I’m happy to have helped, the most common thing ever is to accidentally skip words and to make typos, those are the natural consequences of typing!!
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