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1. flawedteacup on Chapter 1 Sat 01 Sep 2018 02:24PM UTC

   

   Seems like a great start!

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2. 1. inkandpaperqwerty on Chapter 1 Sat 01 Sep 2018 10:08PM UTC

      

      Thank you! I should tell you, the last several paragraphs were cut off or never copied in the first place. I fixed that now, so I would recommend going back and reading that last bit.

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