GavootTheScoot (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Wed 17
Oct 201810:46PM UTC
Hi! I noticed that in the sixth paragraph you have the word “nieve”. I think you might mean “naive”? I hope this doesn’t come off as rude, I don’t mean to be so! I hope you have a wonderful day, your story is very wonderful! (I just came from your most recent chapter, I love it!)
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