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  1. Chaseha_Wing on Chapter 22 Fri 02 Nov 2018 05:14PM UTC

    Yay! They are together. Also I'm going to murder Slade (it's always Slade.). Yaaay *lifts up shovel and goes after assassination!*

    Great work the the fair. I love the sweater Jason tried to pull off and everyone was like "Jay, Honey- no. Just no dear." Even his own boyfriend robbed him over it. Jason has no reprise.

    I also love dick just rolling up to like a hot rod, and just being like "hey doll." And Jason's brain just short circuiting due to sexy over load. Jason pretends to be tough but give him a sexy lover in leather and suddenly all his major brain functions shut down.

    I also did like the talk they had at the beginning but... I felt it was a bit weird they had it in front of all their friends. Lime this deep, intamate conversation about their emotions and the friends are like chilling in the background like "this is happening." Though they seemed happy I probably would be feeling a little awkward...but then again I am naturally awkward with emotions so maybe that's just me.

    I love the seduction on the fares wheel and just how SLOW Jason was on the uptake. Like "I can't wait to get you home and out of those warm cloths."

    "Yeah I prefer chilling out in some thin PJ's too when I'm alone. Cool temperatures are the best."

    "God damn it Jason!"

    Hehe. Okay it was not that bad but pretty close XD.

    Also that talk in his room was perfect. How they confessed things and decided to go after justice together... it was just really nice. Great work. I'm glad that together they will have justice handed to them...and if not cold hard murder is always a good second option.

    But yeah great work as a whole. It was a lot of fun.

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    1. Isaac_McCa11 on Chapter 22 Wed 19 Dec 2018 08:04PM UTC

      To be fair, the way I was picturing it was that they were walking around and the others were talking amongst themselves. It also helps that they are mostly w their s/os too XD I see what u mean tho. And ofc it is Slade!!!! He is the head of Dick's older man club, lbr. Justice is my favorite. I'm a big fan of it lol!!! And the talk at the end is so sweet, I'm glad u liked it!!! Thanks for ur comments!!!

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