Comment on Unwanted Presence

  1. j.bro (Guest) on Chapter 2 Sat 29 Nov 2014 11:02PM UTC

    great chapter, so glad you decided to continue. I think the way you wrote Daryl finally talking to Rick seemed very in character. I could hear Norman Reedus saying all those things, fast heavy breathing, bordering on crying. good stuff. and we should be offended by this asshole. you were not gratuitous with your use of offensive words at all, so if we were offended, you did you're job well!

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