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1. ChillyChili on Chapter 7 Wed 07 Nov 2018 02:29PM UTC

   

   I loved this! You write tense dialogue quite well and I wish it wasn't ending so soon, although I do want the kids to be properly happy now.

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2. 1. anbethmarie on Chapter 7 Thu 08 Nov 2018 07:12AM UTC

      

      thanks!! (if only it were possible to write stories that are made up exclusively of dialogue ahahaha I feel like this would be my kind of thing)
      well, it's got to end sometime, and by now they have been miserable for long enough I think :D

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