Comment on Poor Wayfaring Stranger

  1. MathClassWarfare on Chapter 1 Fri 28 Dec 2018 08:19AM UTC

    This is really, really good. You have a very effective, clear writing style which I enjoy a lot.

    You really convey how confused and alert to danger Prompto is. The scene in the bedroom is riveting-- something as simple as getting out of bed and looking out the window feels like it has real stakes.

    Bravo! I'm looking forward to reading more.

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