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  1. Sona14 on Chapter 5 Sat 29 Dec 2018 10:05PM UTC

    Wow! You left me gaping. XD
    This is creepy and I'm some kind of sickly interested what this man thinks he is doing...
    I'm definitely worried for Obi-Wan (uh, now I don't want to call him just Obi anymore *sniff*) and what this man will do to him once he is awake again. I don't know if you know it but this reminds me really hard of the series Criminal Minds and some of the stalkers there, it was also always sick but also fascinating what would happen next.
    The discussion between Obi-Wan, Mace and Yoda was hilarious even with such a topic to discuss. I love the friendship between Obi-Wan and Mace but even more with his Clones.
    I'm quiet certain Gardener will feel so guilty about all that. Poor trooper!
    I'm SO curious what will happen next,
    Good work so far, the twisted atmosphere was brilliant!
    Greetings Sona :)

    PS: I love it, how the important people in Obi-Wans live found it out one by one and how they tried their best to protect their stubborn friend^^
    Rex question if Cody would share the bottle and Cody's reaction were my favourite lines in that chapter.
    Also Obi-Wan is totally clueless how to discouraged (or do anything right) when he is stalked and it sometimes feels like he has absolutely no self-preservation. Poor Cody!
    Also my biggest reason for the edit : I have this creepy feeling that there aren't just force suppressor and a knock out drug in the mix. My thoughts stayed in the direction of roofies or something that blocks memories per sé or something that takes his free will or something as awful... Aw! I can't let this thoughts go and I need now some fluff, but I'll come back whenever the next chapter comes because this ff is BRILLIANT!!!
    So, thank you for your work!
    Happy new year, by the way (even if it's a bit early )!

    Last Edited Sat 29 Dec 2018 10:38PM UTC

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    1. otherhawk on Chapter 5 Tue 29 Jan 2019 07:48PM UTC

      Hey, sorry for taking so long to reply, especially since your comment was so nice! I do watch Criminal Minds so there probably is some inspiration coming from there, among other creepy media. :) Thankfully this is not going to be anywhere near as bad as that show. Glad you liked the Obi-Wan, Mace and Yoda conversation - that was fun to write.
      Anyway, there's another new chapter now which will answer none of your questions about what may have been in the force suppressor. :)

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