Min (Guest)
on Chapter 4
Wed 02
Jan 201908:24PM UTC
Ooooh there's so much I live about this chapter! Specfically how well you wrote out the action scenes! Starting with izuku's encounter with eraserhead, I especially love how well you showed izuku's disorientation, him unable to tell that aizawa was following him until he was entangled in the "tiolet paper"
I also loved izuku's snappiness with katsuki. “Mad that someone else’s using your punching bag?" major oof! Also izuku jumping 20 feet toward another rooftop? You absolutely captured izuku's chaotic energy. Izuku scaring people away with his smile? Nice
ALSO YEEEE MIKUMO - yes I love that his alias is his prototype
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Min (Guest) on Chapter 4 Wed 02 Jan 2019 08:24PM UTC
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