Writing that story from three different POVs is a really cool idea, I like it! Also, it's always great to read Taako realising he has started to rely on other people x3 That the Umbra Staff keeps him company is super sweet, too!
Btw, I think you did a fantastic job with describing different battle scenarios, keeping every "encounter" interesting. A great chapter!
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CannibaLilly on Chapter 2 Thu 03 Jan 2019 08:16AM UTC
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