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1. MrsLittletall on Chapter 5 Fri 04 Jan 2019 09:21PM UTC

   

   Aaaalright, Sans, I am very worried about you know. He clearly is losing his mind. And his memory. This was so well done that even I felt like I would go crazy. And earlier in the chapter I was thinking that the birds would help him remember that he was on the surface, but even that didn't help.

   Oh, that addition with Frisk at the end. Thinking about the last chapter with Chara, this is getting really really interesting.

   A very good chapter. Your writing is beautiful as always and my most liked line was the ones that even birds deserved Grillby's fries ^^

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2. 1. talkingsoup on Chapter 5 Sat 05 Jan 2019 05:04AM UTC

      

      He's still got his crow friends! It's a shame that so many birds go south for the winter, huh.

      Thank you so so much!

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