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  1. ecotone on Chapter 2 Sun 06 Jan 2019 07:03PM UTC

    This is lovely! I like the rumors and tales that get passed around by the Awoken, and how truth and fiction get mixed up together. And the culture clash between Iona and Lithia definitely feels almost practiced on Iona's part ("'Strictly speaking, I do not.' Iona counters with an undertone to her voice that tells a tale of many times she’s had this discussion before"), which is a nice detail considering how often weird questions must come up. The slow uncovering of their backstories is also nice (if heartbreaking :( ). Wonderful, both this and these two!

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    1. JenCforCarolina on Chapter 2 Sun 20 Jan 2019 07:09PM UTC

      Little Thunderdevil

      Thanks! I was hoping it came across well that she was a bit older as a guardian. Not the first rodeo with Reef Awoken.

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