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1. PreachingtotheQuire on Chapter 1 Tue 08 Jan 2019 01:44AM UTC

   

   Your ability to describe details makes this very compelling. The smell of the trainer's tongue... Peter giggled like popping bubbles and cuddled against the holster strapped across the soldier’s chest. It held two guns and three grenades... The third had two different colored eyes and led with her left hand... I can see all this like I am right next to them. Wow. I'm looking forward to more! 😊

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2. 1. justanotherblond on Chapter 1 Tue 08 Jan 2019 07:56PM UTC

      

      thank you so much! this was such a lovely compliment. the next chapter should be coming fairly soon!

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