annon (Guest)
on Chapter 3
Tue 08
Jan 201906:15PM UTC
i loved reading your descriptions for everything... the food and Edel's house all seem so lovely and the subtle mention of texture or scent really immersed me into this world. plus, Ebine reminds me of someone i know so this chapter was almost like revisiting old friends. :)
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annon (Guest) on Chapter 3 Tue 08 Jan 2019 06:15PM UTC
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