Only suggestion is you actually separate it into paragraphs. Right now the entire thing looks like its one giant chapter, just indent the beginning of each paragraph or put an enter space between each paragraph so it's clearer
It was spaced out when I wrote it up on Word, but upon putting it up on Archive, it became one big mess. I'll space out more in the future now that I know how it looks.
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MysteriousOtaku on Chapter 1 Fri 11 Jan 2019 03:53AM UTC
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AnimaTheAwesome1 on Chapter 1 Fri 11 Jan 2019 08:59AM UTC
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