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1. Unravel24 (Guest) on Chapter 1 Thu 17 Jan 2019 02:23AM UTC

   Amazing grammar, you really got your stuff down. I love the story so far and it sticks to what the original story was (not word for word! ;)) but each character has the same personality, just different positions in life. Keep up the prodigious work! (I hope I'm using that right!)

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2. 1. emotionalsinusoide on Chapter 1 Fri 18 Jan 2019 12:50PM UTC

      

      Thank you so much!:)

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