oh MY GOD THIS IS ABSOLUTELY MAGNIFICIENT!!!! Luke and Aphra being partners (in crime :P), Luke MEETING VADER FOR THE FIRST TIME (aaaaaaah), their conversation which build up to the (half) reveal- Obi-Wan NOT getting killed because of Luke (now that's a pleasant surprise), LEIA KIDNAPPING LUKE LIKE THE GREAT TWIN SISTER AND BADASS JEDI SHE IS- I LOVE THE KIDNAPPING SCENE SO SO SO MUCH ~~~ Vader's fear for Luke when he is being threatened and how he immediately does everything to save him- even let Obi-Wan go, the man he wanted to murder for 20 years and who he hates more than ANYTHING ELSE- the entire scene is just incredible!! Now if I knew this was more than an oneshot then I'd say Luke gotta remember Leia saying "you don't know what WE are to him"- I saw what you did there! :P Incredible writing and a beautiful and creative story and I LOVE IT!!
AHHH I'M HAPPY YOU LIKED SO MUCH OF IT!!! Yes you picked up on it. In the future Luke will be puzzling those words extensively, for sure :D Thank you so much for reading, and leaving this fantastic comment!!
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