Thank you for your comment!! I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying the story! I've only seen some of the Good Place, and not that particular episode, but I'll have to check it out. Eleanor is my favorite and I remember thinking her relationship with her mother was really interesting. It does sound similar to what I'm aiming for: how Shoto is dealing with a parent who hurt him and his siblings but who is now trying to change and how that is something Shoto does want to see. In the manga, it really tugged on my heartstrings how it seems like Endeavor's big change was observing the provisional license training, sitting beside All Might, and looking at Shoto smile as he showed little children his fire quirk. He's seemed to realize he needs to change specifically to make sure Shoto has a good future - a future Shoto wants - and I hope I can show that more in later chapters.
And I will definitely continue! It's taking me a little while, but this fic is really dear to me and I have every intention of finishing it! ❤❤❤
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adastrad on Chapter 4 Wed 27 Feb 2019 09:31AM UTC
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