Very interesting first chapter! I love James POV, and am SO excited to see how Harry and James relationship develops. I also loved the snippets from first year and how you kept Ron and Harry as friends. Many fics with a Slytherin Harry, have Ron immediately hate him and I think your portrayal suits his character much better
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Emeralds_and_Lilies on Chapter 1 Wed 27 Feb 2019 04:53PM UTC
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