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  1. I I B N F (iibnf) on Chapter 14 Wed 07 Jan 2015 10:27AM UTC

    Thank you so much for the kind feedback, it's very encouraging, and sorry for the delay in replying.

    I actually kept Loki really restrained with the squirrels, as he's repressing the grief, so maybe that was the right way to go? I meant to have him really let loose with it later on, much to Tony's horror. SQUIRREL HORROR! Sounds like a good title for a terrible film.

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