this was a great follow up from an amazing first chapter. It felt so real, and so raw. I worry for Clay, for his recovery, and honestly for his head-space. Hopefully his team can help him get through this.
Great writing, with some very good image work. It felt very much like a picture; I could visualize everything. And they way you get into the guys' heads (all of them) is perfect.
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lorarawr on Chapter 2 Wed 17 Apr 2019 02:29PM UTC
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