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  1. Charmkeeper on Chapter 23 Mon 29 Apr 2019 09:21PM UTC

    I ENJOYED READING THIS CHAPTER. Idk. I guess it was something about the abject horror of all the Daves being out and Candela trying to get the situation under control before the kiddos arrived, and then...

    "Oh. Is round. o ^ o This is fine."

    ALSO. YOU KNOW. YOUR MAGPIE. AS IN THERE'S MORE THAN ONE. Maybe I should have known that? BUT I DID NOT. And it was just a detail I grabbed onto.

    I liked how comparatively light this chapter is, to how I picture the overall mood of the story. Like filler episodes in animes. But it didn't read like a filler episode. Idk if that makes any sense, but there you go.

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. <333333

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    1. ChiiwiFruit on Chapter 23 Tue 30 Apr 2019 02:28AM UTC

      I LOVE WRITING MERLE BEING ALL UNIMPRESSED BY THINGS.
      Literally my favourite part of this chapter was them very seriously trying to dry the Natu under the hand dryer. And how they totally would have killed it by accident if Candela hadn't pointed out that IT'S HARD TO BREATHE WITH AIR BLASTING IN YOUR FACE.

      There's only one Magpie. Grisaille was just implying ownership/possessiveness. xD But I'm glad you're paying attention to little details!

      THANK YOU <333333

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