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  1. Letterhead on Chapter 20 Sun 05 May 2019 09:01AM UTC

    Every chapter I want to give kudos, but this once was just so good!
    Ron asking Fleur was great, it truly felt like he wanted to get to know her finally, now that he had the time to do so.
    Hashing it out with Hermione was very interesting and dramatic, and I almost got an inkling that he might have let some information slip about the past. Seriously I have almost no idea where you're going to take this plot but I love going along on the ride.

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    1. Kirinin on Chapter 20 Sun 05 May 2019 05:15PM UTC

      Thank you so much! Everyone is liking Fleur very much, which is lovely.

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