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  1. Darwin Gwein (Guest) on Chapter 8 Wed 28 Jan 2015 02:26AM UTC

    It's nice to be reading this again! All those feels still hit as hard as they did before...

    That said, I think I spotted a discrepancy. As John was getting ready, tying his tie and all, he said he didn't have a jacket. Then in the car, he lays his jacket across Vriska. It had me confused :p

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