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  1. Brenda (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 18 May 2019 02:30PM UTC

    Dany’s given absolutely everything for Jon and his people, and got nothing in return.

    He goes around feeling unworthy and “oh poor Jon who’s been raised a bastard” but he is a a Targaryen, look what Dany’s n been through as a child.

    It’s really sad for the series to end this way.

    Anyway, I think this was great! I hope you post more soon. Jon’s fucked it up. He knows nothing seriously, and he will have to deal with he consecuencies. If not everything’s come easy for him. He will have to feel pain, just a little at least, if he wants to understand Dany.

    I saved this in favorites. I really want to read more!!

    Cheers!

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    1. Hakaishin (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 18 May 2019 03:09PM UTC

      I like how you excuse everything Dany did as terrible writing by D&D and yet place every shit thing that happened to Jon on his own shoulders.

      This is worse than the show. You're tearing down other characters simply to make Dany out to be a fuckin saint, which she's not.

      Jon got fucked worse than Dany did. He started the show as a complicated character that knew that sometimes you have to do shit things to do the right thing. His time with the freefolk was supposed to teach him that.

      Then he just becomes a carbon copy of what Ned was. In the books Jon is no where even close to this characature on the show.

      He literally became a 1 dimensional side character for the last season and a half.

      You want to tear down characters to make your favorite look better? Fine, but don't think your any better than D&D. It's the same fuckin shit.

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      1. Kcinara on Chapter 1 Tue 13 Aug 2019 01:19PM UTC

        “Jon got fucked worse than Dany did.” No he did not. She was constantly raped while he decided to be a martyr. He could have gone to Dorne or Essos, but decided to suffer on the wall. That is a very important point, Jon choose to go to the Wall, while Daenerys didn’t choose to be sold.

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        1. Hakaishin (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 13 Aug 2019 01:25PM UTC

          I was talking about the writing of season 7 and 8, not literally the characters, themselves...

          Dany at the very least had some depth.

          Jon has been a 1 dimensional character since the end of season 6, arguably before that. The real Jon Snow died when he was murdered and whoever came back was D&Ds bastardized shit version of him.

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          1. Baler1on_Black_Dr3ad on Chapter 1 Mon 09 Dec 2019 09:59AM UTC

            Both characters are diffrent from there book counterparts. Both did very ooc shit in the last few seasons and even in some parts of the first few seasons.
            Essentially all the characters as well as the plot and writing didn't make any sense at all!

            For me Dany was Dany in Season 1, already from Season 2 onwards they changed her character. Jon also in the first few seasons did some things/did not do things compared to his book counterpart! After season 5 he was unrecognisable, along with Dany.

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    3. Booknerd95 on Chapter 1 Sat 18 May 2019 10:00PM UTC

      Aww thank you so much!! I'm so glad that people are enjoying this story, it's people like you who motivate me to continue writing :) I know I hate what the writers did to the show. Now I know why all the actors kept trying to warn us, even they hated it! I'm really trying to have the next chapter done by sunday so hopefully I'll finish in time.

      Yes Jon has fucked it up, but at least in this story he realizes that he was wrong and he can do something about it. I just hope I can portray this in a way that flows with the story. Writing this has been a challenge since I'm not a writer but I can't keep my mouth shut anymore about how they ruined the show. So I hope that I can provide some comfort to others who are also sad and angry about what happened. Again thank you so much for reading this :)

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