Yoooo, that sounds so peaceful! I love this first chapter. I really enjoyed how you wrote about the nature around him. I especially enjoyed the part about the peaky mosquitos! Hahah I wouldn't have gotten very far there personally because I'm hella allergic to bug bites/stings of any sort. Which is sadness for me because I love nature and have wanted to go camping for ever, but... -sigh- Nature doesn't like me. Hahah Give this poor city girl a break, please!
At the thought of big foot, Keith's mind went wild. That's what I love about that cinnamon roll! Haha He's a loveable nerd. <3
YAASSS, VV, this is a great start! I'm excited to read more!! <3
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Koda on Chapter 1 Thu 30 May 2019 09:25PM UTC
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