Marlon (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Sat 29
Jun 201910:44PM UTC
Hey! So i've recently started reading this fic of yours and it's been amazing!! I'll have to admit that at the beggining i wasn't expecting much from it, because it seemed very simple (?? dunno if i'm explaining it right, but some scenes were not as deeply explored as they could have been, not described in detail). Even though it was very very simple at the beggining, I love it that the chapters are short. This way it doesn't get tiring to read the story. Some other things I like are: -cliff hangers -your chapter notes, they always get me laughing my ass off -the friendship between Nico and Leo, which is (As i see it) slowly developing to something very nice and healthy -The awkwardness when Nico and Jason meet sçdlklçklk Im a huge jasico fan, can't hide it So, it's been great to read your story, look forward to reading more of it
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Marlon (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 29 Jun 2019 10:44PM UTC
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