Aaah, such a lovely chapter with so much fretting and worry and finally relief and happy all around. Well, happy as in "mind blown" for the boys but STILL XD Great to see all your headcanons weaved into Damas story too, love it!
Great story, only concrit I have is that it was so completely a Daxter and Damas show (DnD?) until the end, where Daxter falls a bit on the wayside - BUT it would be hard to have him in the center for such a scene, where it has to end, with Damas having other things on his mind.
yeah honestly I agree with that-- in the end it was a tossup between giving Daxter more space or focusing on the Dadmas arc (and I know where my loyalties lie haha) definitely something I'll keep in mind on future stories though!
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