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  1. elenniel Sat 27 Jul 2019 06:39PM UTC

    elenniel

    to Thimoreld: the largest and most ancient library of magical texts he’s aware of, located on Besmor
    I just want to say that I really like the names you came up wtih - Thimoreld, Besmor

    it is powerful enough that when it moves people back through time, it actually eats up the time that has already passed, so no branches are formed
    Hmmmmmm interesting. I want further explanation. hahah

    But in every single reality, one detail remains the same: Sif, if she lives, hates Loki.
    Ouch for Loki there...

    a Valkyrie called Brunnhilde.
    Glad you used her name! It annoys me somewhat the the movies seem to just call her Valkyrie. (At least right now)

    Well, that doesn’t sound like something Loki would do.
    Haha!!

    “He was one of my closest friends for a thousand years,” she says, and she sounds tired. “It’s hard to forget that just because of a decade of bad behavior.”
    Oooh, that is such a great point.

    And then she steps forward and punches him in the face.
    Absolutely deserved it. xD

    This was not quite as romantic as I expected it to be, but I liked it! You did a great job building the story and showing how Loki went exploring through timelines until he eventually found the version he thought he could be happy with.

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    1. Eienvine Sat 27 Jul 2019 09:10PM UTC

      Yeah, I thought it would take more time than I had to get these two to a more romantic point. :) But they'll get there someday. Thanks so much for this long lovely comment!

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