I loved this story, it was very funny, I loved how you wrote the characters, they were very funny! I loved the secret sign of the Golden Deer, I liked the joke about Dimitri joining a cult and how no one respects Lorenz, he just wants to be invited to tea, I laughed that Felix is a memelord, it was also funny how Felix passed out, as Sylvain did He has a gay panic, didn't Felix admit he likes Sylvain? Is he still in closeted? Just as I laugh that everyone echoing Ferdinand's name, Dorothea she acts like she's their queen, but you know I love Hubert/Ferdinand so what are the chances of having this couple in this story?
I liked this first chapter, I'm excited to read more confusions that these characters will get ready
IM GONNA SOB THIS IS SUCH A KIND COMMENT THANK YOU!!!! <33 ill definitely put some more hubert and ferdinand interactions in in the future, i still have to play through their supports in the game but once i do so you can definitely expect to see more of them!! (also i hope my dorothea bias wasnt too obvious HAHAHADBGS shes my favorite what a queen)
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