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  1. justpassingthrudon’tmindme (Guest) on Chapter 2 Thu 15 Aug 2019 01:54AM UTC

    Hmmm. A good opener, but I was honestly expecting more. Maybe for the next one have Bowser get suspicious of his kids when he notices a discrepancy in their stories on what happened, and eventually have him find, to his horror, that they purposefully allied with Dry Morton Sr. (I’m thinking that’s the proper way to address him, Dry Bowser/Morton Sr. is too long) because they still shared his ideals of Koopa supremacy. They regret their decision, of course, but mostly because they were hypnotized without their knowledge; they’re still racist after all. So not knowing how to get his stubborn kids to change their minds, he goes to the one person he believes who can help him. Princess Rosalina. Not only does she have the patience of a saint and a heart of gold to match, she’s a parent as well. This is why he chose her over Peach; she has the experience of dealing with children while Peach hasn’t. Yet at least. Her and Pauline might adopt in the future. Or have Mario be a donor parent. Now with two ultra powerful rulers trying to redeem these brats, there’s no telling what’s going to happen. Between their friends, themselves, or each other~ ;). Oh, and where the hell did that scumbag Gabriel go?

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    1. BeeTeeDubya14 on Chapter 2 Thu 15 Aug 2019 06:11PM UTC

      As much as I love your ideas, I think I'm done with this fic. I especially like your Bowsalina content (I swear, there is a lack of clean Bowsalina in this world), and the Donor!Mario thought is genius!

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      1. justpassingthrudon’tmindme (Guest) on Chapter 2 Thu 15 Aug 2019 06:59PM UTC

        Dammit! Just when it was getting good! We didn’t even get to see Giga Bowser smash Gabriel! And Bowsalina never got the chance to take off either :(. I was hoping for some cute moments between them, like with them having pet names for each other. He calls her “Rosy” and she calls him “Starlight”. And when Pauline and Peach’s daughter is born, (with Mario being the donor dad) she looks just like Peach. Bowser Jr. develops a crush on her when they get older; Peach and Bowser point out the irony in it ALL THE TIME when they’re all together. Damn man, I hope you change your mind.

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        1. BeeTeeDubya14 on Chapter 2 Thu 15 Aug 2019 08:30PM UTC

          I may not be done for good - I just want to work on other things too, yeah?
          You said you wrote based on other folks' work, right? Maybe it's your time!

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          1. justpassingthrudon’tmindme (Guest) on Chapter 2 Thu 15 Aug 2019 08:37PM UTC

            Oh crap, does this mean you’re giving me permission to continue this? I’m not sure if I’m ready for that...

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            1. BeeTeeDubya14 on Chapter 2 Fri 16 Aug 2019 03:14AM UTC

              You don't have to if you don't want to! Please credit me if you do, though.

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              1. Justpassingthruman on Chapter 2 Thu 22 Aug 2019 03:17AM UTC

                Hello BeeTeeDubya14! I apologize if you don’t recognize me due to my different username, but I assure you that it’s me! “justpassingthrudon’tmindme”! I want to let you know that I’ve taken your advice and have decided to continue your story! It’s called “The Koopa King, The Star Princess, & The Dark Butterfly” ! It’s currently underway, and I shall update whenever possible! I’ve also given you credit like you asked. I really hope that you enjoy it, I’ve never used Archive of Our Own before, or written fanfic to begin with, so this will be my very first time writing here, or in general for that matter. Anyways, thank you so much for this opportunity and I look forward to hearing your thoughts on it! Hope to talk to you soon! Peace!

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                1. BeeTeeDubya14 on Chapter 2 Thu 22 Aug 2019 05:15PM UTC

                  Oh, heck yeah. There's a thing when you upload it, by the way, that says "This work is a remix, a translation, a podfic, or was inspired by another work." You can credit me by using that.
                  I wish you the best of luck!
                  Excitedly in wait,
                  BeeTeeDubya14

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                  1. Justpassingthruman on Chapter 2 Thu 22 Aug 2019 05:39PM UTC

                    Oh yes, I saw that when I was creating the tags and made sure to copy the URL like it asked. It should be somewhere around the summary when the story’s uploaded, but to be safe, I credited you in the notes as well. Can’t wait to see what you think when it’s up! I’ll be sure to let you know!

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