Comment on Collisions

1. Leyna Tue 29 Dec 2009 05:10AM UTC

   

   I liked Ash's pov, - his uncertainties, and the way Sean proved he had been paying attention to Ash. This is a gorgeous line:
   "Often it feels as though Ash's entire life has been a series of collisions, some more serious than others."

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2. 1. halotolerant Fri 01 Jan 2010 09:15PM UTC

      

      I'm very pleased you liked it! Many thanks for commenting.

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