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  1. TinyLady on Chapter 3 Fri 27 Sep 2019 03:04AM UTC

    Before I read the rest of the chapter, I want to say, that Belletrix probably didn't attend the Hogwarts at this time. She was born in 1951. That means she is roughly 9 years older than Severus, and I'm sure she didn't dwell in Hogwarts after she graduated.
    I love this story, but would you please consider removing that part or changing her to someone else?
    Because I can't concentrate knowing this little part of the story... sorry for the inconvenience.

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    1. Account Deleted on Chapter 3 Fri 27 Sep 2019 04:36AM UTC

      Why would the author have to do that?
      It’s au anyway. Just let it be.

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      1. TinyLady on Chapter 3 Fri 27 Sep 2019 05:04AM UTC

        I know, I know, but I also think being au is one thing and keep other (although minor) things correct is another.
        If the author decide not to change, I won't interfere further. Just thought asking one time though.

        Last Edited Fri 27 Sep 2019 05:16AM UTC

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        1. MoonlightEtherealAria on Chapter 3 Fri 27 Sep 2019 02:22PM UTC

          I apologise, I haven't read/seen the Harry Potter stories in a while. In many other snames fanfics, Bellatrix is included, so I assumed she was present at the same time. I'm not going to change it, mostly because this is really the only time Bellatrix will be present in this story. I just needed a crazy bat to be screechy :') I'll probably use Narcissa instead from now on though. Thanks for you comment!

          Last Edited Fri 27 Sep 2019 02:29PM UTC

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