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I enjoyed reading this. My only comment is that concrete is a 20th century invention and the story seems to be set in an earlier time. All the best, Dan
I enjoyed reading this. My only comment is that concrete is a 20th century invention and the story seems to be set in an earlier time.
All the best,
Dan
Thanks! I should have probably said cement, wich was used by romans by mixing lyme dust with stuff; concrete at we know it was apparently perfected in the 1800's according to Wikipedia. Good catch!
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Dan Pederson (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 11 Mar 2015 05:51PM UTC
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Tarradel on Chapter 1 Thu 12 Mar 2015 04:44AM UTC
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