Oh my God I love this chapter! These two are so dumb ahaa. Nearly falling off a cliff, can't stop arguing for a moment can they? In Sanji's defense though Zoro did just drop the L word bomb on him out of nowhere so there's that. Luffy's bizarre yet insightful explanation of Zoro and Sanji dancing around each other was surprisingly clear. I understood perfectly what he meant even if it technically doesn't make much sense. O.M.G the shirt! THE SEXY SHIRT! Sanji does look good in it. Him trying to seduce Zoro omfg. Wtf Zoro seriously doesn't remember giving it to him, I can't. It's such a Zoro move though.
Yet again Robin and Brook are the only ones unbothered by everything. Lol poor Nami again she should charge them both interest for the stress she's being put under. Gaining weight too lol. I loved the new "housewife rules" this chapter introduces. Lol if your man sucks kick him to the curb and get a new one, heck yeah! Now these I can get behind. Chopper is gonna be pissed when he finds out Zoro is bleeding through his bandages again. Rip Zoro.
Lol Chopper not understanding the intricate mating rituals oh humans. No honey trust me, it's just these two that are weird. I love this fic so much. I love your writing I'm glad you took the time to write about the other straw hat members reacting to these two idiots as well. As always everyone is hilarious and very much in character. Ussop's poor eye though, rip. Great fic can't wait for the next chapter.
They are the dumbest but ahh!! Your comments are always so sweet so thank you so much!!!
Zoro 100% doesn't know what shirts look like when they're folded vs how they would appear on a person and is an idiot. He's so bad at this. SANJI IS NOT BETTER THOUGH.
The new rules were so fun to write. I wanted to explore the idea that the kambakka kingdom rules probably were a LITTLE more uh. Flexible. I can't imagine they take shit from people, after all.
The next chapter will be a doozy if and when I finish but hopefully it keeps being as good or y'know. There's always repeating cliff diving.
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