That's honestly a really exciting thing to read for a lot of reasons :D . I'm glad you're seeing what you like from Jasper! That last segment, Jasper's dialogue especially, took me about a week to get right. Jasper and Lapis were a majority of the work this time because of how much is going on between them. Like I said in the notes, parallelism is fun, and Jasper's just stating truths from her perspective. How much anyone reads into what she has to say and how everyone responds, though, is up to them. I'm a bit confused about what you mean by 'second trailer'? I couldn't find one besides the one that came out around monday, I think it was.
Here is the first Trailer, if you look closely at the begining you can see Spinel on Yellow Diamond's left shoulder with her tear tracks removed. so despite all of their History, the Diamonds are actually benefital for Spinel (SOME FUCKIGN HOW!), I guess Steven really pounded in human Morality during the time skip: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mzj9y4k04F0
This is the second trailer:https://youtu.be/ceN2b3isjFI It seems Steven's fuse is burning very short with Jasper.
Ahh, now I understand. I hadn't considered the opening a trailer in my head, but that makes sense. Yeah, we'll see what they do with the Diamonds and Spinel, maybe. Mostly, I'm just glad she gets to be happy. I can't possibly keep my thoughts about the Diamonds and SU's intended message concise here, but Little Homeworld and everything else are concepts I'm really looking forward to. Possible resolution for Jasper is also very promising (and hopefully not super counter to anything I'm planning here...) :D
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