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  1. Daddy_Long_Legs (Guest) on Chapter 4 Mon 09 Dec 2019 04:25AM UTC

    Wow! You handled that Luffy/Zoro confrontation beautifully! I always worry in fanfics when I see Luffy and Zoro fighting because those two are fucking rocks, so putting them in a situation where they would fight is hard, but keeping that fight from escalating the way it did on Whiskey Peak is even harder. But man, you used some admirable restraint, keeping Zoro on the edge enough to doubt Luffy, but knowing their dynamic well enough to bring him back in when Luffy says the right thing. You nailed it!! Zoro can’t catch a break, but then again when can he ever?
    I’m loving this fic, the longer chapter was a treat! Looking forward as always to the next one <3

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    1. VIKAN on Chapter 4 Fri 27 Dec 2019 04:35PM UTC

      Ahhhh so happy you think so!! Writing a scene with Luffy and Zoro is always hard, especially if it’s a serious scene. Hope you enjoy this new chapter as well!!!

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