Comment on Four To The End - Book Two

  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 6 Sat 14 Mar 2020 01:57PM UTC

    First, I love their letters of how if they die Remus can have their books XD

    Lily sounds so cute with that haircut ahh XD

    And yes! The boys! Finally! :D but I feel sorry for Regulus... Sirius was unnecessarily harsh.

    Also in regards to Sirius' story, you go with what feels best for you! If you want to just focus on the main one for now that's fine. It's a lot of effort doing multiple stories!

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    1. DovahTobi on Chapter 6 Mon 16 Mar 2020 01:19AM UTC

      xD those boys know what Remus would want haha
      Yesss I always see her with long hair and I do like her with long hair but she'd be SO cute with short hair (so she's going to go between short and long a lot in my story).
      Sirius was pretty harsh :( but he is coming out of a summer of having that shoved into his face and wanting to protect Regulus, and Regulus just... they love each other but it's difficult. I'm not saying Sirius was in the right because he wasn't. I just feel bad for them both :(
      Thank you so much for the feedback! I want to continue either way it was a matter of whether I was going scrap and restart, or just continue as is and I /think/ I've made my decision but we'll see
      Thank you so much for the comment!!

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      1. Account Deleted on Chapter 6 Mon 16 Mar 2020 09:28AM UTC

        Haha yes they do XD

        Hehe same (as in, I see her with long hair) but short is very cute especially on younger teen Lily XD

        Yeah true. I do feel bad for Siri too knowing what goes on at home ;-;

        Okay cool look forward to seeing how it goes either way! :D

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