Comment on Reconnected Roads [Slenderman X Reader]

  1. pempeeeperem on Chapter 1 Tue 17 Mar 2020 05:31PM UTC

    I think I'm gonna like this fic. This first chapter leaves a really good impression. Loved the gags. And the dialogue? Well written and snappy, I like it.
    I wonder if everyone is human? Seemed like Jeff, Ben and the reader are. I kept wondering how dating a monster in high school would look like haha I hope you'll explain that in upcoming chapters.
    Oh, but two things. The paragraph in which reader gets into the van has a repetitive "fear" - it's nothing big, I just noticed it. The other thing is how do they know it is "her" her? Especially if she looks like a meth head I wonder if they believe that their boss would have ever been with her - unleas they don't know why she's on the no harm list... huh... So, yeah why do they straight up believe her name?

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