Comment on Pleas to the Stars

  1. acoldredfigure on Chapter 1 Mon 23 Mar 2020 05:26AM UTC

    Wow. This is one of the most incredible pieces of writing I’ve read in a long time. I want to leave million kudos !!
    This is so so well done and the perspective of Loki and the slow unspooling of his mind is absolutely fantastic. Reading it felt as if I was picking up pieces of discarded writing off the floor, written by a person who had long left them behind. Loki truly came to life and I could see him writing these words and feel the pain in them, see the messy strokes of his handwriting degrade as his soul wore away.
    There are truly no words to describe how amazing this is and how long I lay thinking about this work of art.
    This reminds me a lot of “The Bunker Diaries “ , another great piece of fiction that has a young man in isolation slowly die as he’s left underground with no answers.
    You’ve captured something so real and intense.
    This is so good !

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    1. JaggedCliffs on Chapter 1 Wed 03 Jun 2020 02:23AM UTC

      Thank-you so much! And don't worry, your comment is worth a lot of kudos :)

      I wrote this fic over the course of many months, which helped with the feeling of this fic's timeline. And that's such a beautiful of description of the pieces of this story!

      I haven't heard of "The Bunker Diaries," and reading the Wiki description - ouch, that looks like a rough story! I don't think this even gets that dark (especially with my chapter 2 :p ).

      Thank-you again!

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