Comment on Vital Maintenance

1. shella688 on Chapter 3 Mon 23 Mar 2020 07:17AM UTC

   

   "He realised he hadn’t noticed the empty space Brian’s absence had left in his life—he never did, not until his return and the ache of a missing piece sliding back into place."
   Oh wow :'))

    

   Also the tonal shift from them being soft about friendships to "I'll polish your Olympian spear ;)" killed me good work

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2. 1. Triss_Hawkeye on Chapter 3 Wed 25 Mar 2020 08:03PM UTC

      

      Thank you! <3

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