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  1. ' Now, he was like rotten fruit full of bugs wrapped up in pretty packaging, and she was repulsed by the slime. '
    Ew. What imagery (very effective)

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    1. mug with the kanji for dreams

      Hi! First of all: thank you for reading and commenting along the way. It brightens my day so much, although... dun dun dun... so many people seem to hate the ending, because at some point they go silent. (And it's totally OK if you hate the ending and don't want to say so. And if you haven't gotten to the ending yet, um, well, maybe you won't hate it?)

      But thank you, really, sincerely. I enjoyed your comments along the way.

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